Revision Log

  • Reorganized paragraph structure. Completely moved entire paragraphs to better fit in a more cohesive flow.


  • Split up paragraphs because I had some that spanned multiple pages.


  • Reduced run-on sentences.


  • Revised sentences to remove em dashes because there were far too many.


  • Fixed broken links.


  • Fixed areas that needed to be hyperlinked and weren’t.


  • Changed some word choices to better reflect an academic setting


  • Removed some words and phrases that portrayed an unintended bias


  • Inserted more videos that connect directly to the topics being discussed, in order to

    disrupt the sea of words, and add more substance.