- Reorganized paragraph structure. Completely moved entire paragraphs to better fit in a more cohesive flow.
- Split up paragraphs because I had some that spanned multiple pages.
- Reduced run-on sentences.
- Revised sentences to remove em dashes because there were far too many.
- Fixed broken links.
- Fixed areas that needed to be hyperlinked and weren’t.
- Changed some word choices to better reflect an academic setting
- Removed some words and phrases that portrayed an unintended bias
- Inserted more videos that connect directly to the topics being discussed, in order to
disrupt the sea of words, and add more substance.
Academically Prosed 